- Erotic Poetry
- Dust My Broom
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back’n’forth
between
nipples’n’bellybutton
making
sleight of hand conversation
as sonic brooms
shake
dust shaped thoughts
from your mind
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoI like the extended, very elegant and original imagery, although could not connect the "dust shaped thoughts" with an erotic association.
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoallergic to dust ,
LOL...
therefor, I keep nothing
dusty.......*grin*
great wordplay !!
-sGp-
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agothere is intelligent life here after all,
at least some poems hinting wit <grin>
I have enjoyed your poems, thanks Art~
sandspikeabout 19 years agoI feel a little too much word play for such a serious
subject. A climax is as near heaven as you can get on this
earth and shouldn't be swept under the rug. Your poem
are cool man.
