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Click hereYou stole my heart the moment we meet
Your beauty brought me to my knees
In your eyes I found a kindred spirit
A connection I didn’t think possible
A friend and lover wrapped into one
Our paths destine to cross, fates intertwined
Although our future is unclear
My love for you is eternal
My soul mate my friend my love
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agobut a number of grammatical and spelling problems detract from the overall affect. On the first line "meet" wants to be "met", "destine" wants to be either "destined" or "destiny" depending upon where you are going with it.
You might want to edit the poem and resubmit...
jim : )
