- Erotic Poetry
- ear candy
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Click herethe flesh crawls
at the
thought
i feel it entering
my
ear again
piercing my
mind
like a bullet
it travels down to
my heart
i think it
has my name
on it...
the sickness boils
in me
and I want
to let it out
I look to you
puncture me
punish me
purify me with
your meat
can you satisfy my
bile..can you
match the
....vile
fantasies that
haunt my waking
moments
and steal
restful sleep from
my grasp
fill me up with your
lust
batter me with your
want
suck on my wounds
and taste the
posion
that is making
my flesh crawl
I'll do you the
same
just show me
where to
put my lips
- COMMENTS
TheRainManover 18 years agoThis has some raw power to it. I think the linebreaking could be improved to even further add to the impact, but this is an excellent first poem here.
I especially liked the ending.
Bill Dadaover 18 years ago...you know exactly where to put those lips. It was a rhetorical question right?
ty,bd
