Easter Eggs

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MikeIvy
MikeIvy
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Easter Eggs

Orderly yet random

Tangles of twigs

Of avian nurseries

In the old spruce tree

Down by the stone wall


Sparkling eye catchers

Woven in the nest

Show the proud owners

Have decorated well

To welcome new life

Nature's Easter eggs

Pale sky blue, flecked

With cloud white

Warmed by mothers

Loving wing, downy breast

MikeIvy
MikeIvy
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softsmilesoftsmilealmost 13 years ago
Lovely

With a heart that sees the magic of nature, you walk us into spring with such awareness... I get the feeling there is very little that goes unnoticed when you are walking in your woods. Thank you for taking us with you. :)

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
One tip

probably a good idea, esp since this is the first line:

Orderly yet random

If you introduce a contrast, another one is in order somewhere, especially at a place of some importance.

Just a thought, Mike, A5