Eating a Kiwi

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I cup her firmly.
Lower my head.
Teeth nip.
Flesh parts.
My tongue drives deep.
Her juices flow freely.
Lapping, nibbling.
She explodes in my mouth.


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Some_peopleSome_peoplealmost 15 years ago
overused ?

explodes is a terrible way to describe a female orgasm.The entire poem felt rushed,I hope you take more time with your lovers.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 15 years ago
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Very erotic and suggestive. It reminded me of Alan Bates eating a fig, making eye contact with Glenda Jackson in the movie, "Women In Love," based on the novel by D.H. Lawrence. (They didn't have kiwis back then.)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good!

I love the underlying innuendo. Well thought-out.

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisteralmost 15 years ago
Sensuously appetising

I love this and hope you take your time enjoying your fruit.

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