- Erotic Poetry
- Eden
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Your face alone
fills my head with stories
Your arching eyebrows
introduce the characters
my head grows heavy
drenched in the sun-filled green
of your eyes
alone
you satisfy
Your lips need no form
no consonants
no language can
satisfy more than
the sole natural
poise of
your thirsty lips
You
lock my thoughts
in the lush
garden that is
you alone
satisfy my roots
stretched
to weave you
into my lungs
you wind
the ivy laughter
through
You burst as a
bloom from my mouth
You satisfy
and trap my isolated
heartbeat
You are satisfied stillness
coiled around my blank stare
Pondering--slowly
constricting my restlessness
Distilling mute love into speech
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoenjoyed reading the last verse..flowed nicely in alliteration...nice///bluerains
Anonymousover 18 years agoah I love your new use of language/images. Well done, you sure know what you are doing with your word choices.
"You are satisfied stillness
coiled around my blank stare"
"Distilling mute love into speech"
speaking of distilled, I think you could distill this poem even more and make it more potent...
look forward to more,
annaswirls
