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Elders in a Dark Meadow

byoneiria©

Dappled with moonlight
and liver spots,

flesh cleaves to flesh,
undulating in a bed of moss.

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by Maria239404/16/14

hmmmm

the phrase "liver spots" evokes a sort of unpleasant image, but the poem is really good. I liked it the way it is, but I would probably change that to something else, but that's just me :) Keep up themore...

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