Elemental

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hotti
hotti
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Elemental

The sun
Heated and luminous
Scorches my sleep-crusted eyelids
Daring me to see

The dawn
Bright and fierce
Mocks my tremulous hopes
Forsaking all my dreams

The mist
So thick it blocks all light
Lies heavily upon my soul
Drenching all warmth

The earth
Barren, charred, defiled
Embraces my future
Promising eternity

hotti
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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Beckons

A wordsmith crafting

powerful images

demanding to heard

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Paramount Poem~

wow what a play with words

powerful and gripping,

a very good poem, thanks

for the journey of words

Art~

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