- Erotic Poetry
- Elicit Endeavors
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Elicit endeavors keep reaching beyond
and taking what is mine. Freely
given, taken with relish and cream
spread eagle wide. I have your key
to hide and seek. I shall find your button,
drain it dry and fleece every moment, for what
it's worth.
Sharing wine between pressing thighs,
silken tongue glued to your button of thriving
need. Exhausting all avenues from your top to
bottoms up. Bite, nip and afterwards take you
down, to nothing, just to rebuild you over
and over again. Take, oppress, slice, figure out
a way to press on. For preliminary measures
are forecasting, you are mine. I shall extract
every morsel from bone to flesh. Finishing
only, to take you, milk you dry again.
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 16 years agoReally, not a bad poem at all but certain word and phrase choices weaken it: "I have your key to hide and seek. I shall find your button/silken tongue glued to your button of thriving need." Yesterday, Angeline's review mentioned your other poem and the use of "lil." I agree that some words just don't work and they can detract from a poem.
