elusive

bySabina_Tolchovsky©

ellipse or ellipsis
incomplete sentances
dance with incomplete circles

do I accept your comments
or execpt your comments?

does my poetry submit
or does my pen hold the key to submission?

clever or obscure?

can you see beyond the metaphors?
do you want to...?

I can see the ghost through the window
even on the sunny days.

can you?

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