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Written by jes_da_man:
Tuesday, October 23, 2001 - 5:40:00 PM.
Please be nice enough to vote or comment on this (or any other, or all) of my stories or poems. It would be truly appreciated.
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Email me.
Please.
Tell me how much you love me.
I love it when you say it.
I love how you say it.
If I can't hear you say it,
I need to see you write it.
I want to feel it in your words,
Just like I feel it in your voice.
For it makes me feel so good.
Of this, I have no choice.
I remember the last time I heard you tell me,
How much you really adored me.
It stirred such beautiful feelings within me,
When last I heard you say you loved me.
So, email me.
Please.
Tell me how much you love me.
- COMMENTS
jes_da_manabout 13 years agoAuthorThank you for your comments twelveoone.
Yes, I did ask for it... and your comment is immensely appreciated.
I am sorry you feel that the poem sounds too clichéd. But as I said before... I suppose I am just 'old school' and love to use clichés in my material.
As for it being song lyrics... it is not. But maybe I should patent it as such and live off the royalties from it... hahaha.
However, in fact, I did at one time have this poem posted on a Geocities webpage, with background music... which was the instrumental version of 'Love Letters In The Sand'. And rather than make a parody of the words, I do believe the music not only enhanced the words, but the entire poem itself.
Sincerely,
jes_da_man
twelveooneabout 13 years agoa 3, because you are not new.
1. It is too much like song lyrics, which most of the time need music.
2. even if it was a song lyric, it sounds too cliched, so much so, that the only music I would accept with these would make a parody of the words.
you asked.
