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Click hereEmbarrassingly, Blushingly, a Triolet
One charm I find being a girl,
the joy that comes in dress divine--
a spray of fragrance, a bit of curl.
One charm I find being a girl,
the pretty skirt, the lovely twirl,
a beaded top that fits so fine.
One charm I find being a girl,
the joy that comes in dress divine.
I'd like it better without the line explaining it's a triolet, but it's a five.
I need a pedi/mani after reading this one--very girly-girl. Espie likes.
.....a triolet. You have nothing to blush or be embarassed about.
Tess
Well done! The language used and the rhymes made this feel very girlish which I would say is a very desired effect. Good poetry!