Embarrassingly, Blushingly

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Lilacs
Lilacs
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Embarrassingly, Blushingly, a Triolet

One charm I find being a girl,
the joy that comes in dress divine--
a spray of fragrance, a bit of curl.
One charm I find being a girl,
the pretty skirt, the lovely twirl,
a beaded top that fits so fine.
One charm I find being a girl,
the joy that comes in dress divine.

Lilacs
Lilacs
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theognistheognisabout 13 years ago
*****

I'd like it better without the line explaining it's a triolet, but it's a five.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
Wooshie...

I need a pedi/mani after reading this one--very girly-girl. Espie likes.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Definitely..........

.....a triolet. You have nothing to blush or be embarassed about.

Tess

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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well since you prefaced it..actually it is quite good.

100

KobaKobaabout 13 years ago

Well done! The language used and the rhymes made this feel very girlish which I would say is a very desired effect. Good poetry!