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embedded pain (haiku)

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bluerains
bluerains
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mother earth whimpers
cracked walls in humanity
seeps into her blood

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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 20 years ago
nice

i love the dark tone of this piece.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
jthserra

I wish jim would comment on this poem. I'm trying to learn the right way to write haiku. I know that American haiku doesn't have to be 5-7-5

You mention nature, but does there need to be mention of a season? I need to go look this up now. :)

Anyway, nice poem.

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