Embers Around a Fire

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/05/2021
Created 03/26/2003
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Embers  around a Fire
Fire crackling      embers burning  
Little sparks wafting
in the torrent of heated air,
                                     rising
        A vortex
                    a place
                              a whirlpool

Sometimes
One looks down and sees ,
crystal waters shoaling
often the Sun
                  glints like diamonds
off the white capped tips of crest
waves
mayhap the wheeling singularity,
those self same vertices
that jumbled matrix

Twisted and shorn
                     Lovingly the hand
runs over skin freshly
                     bereft and forlorn
hair today and gone again
            who would have thought

Taken and riven
those sightless eyes watching
Does He need to know
Nay He knows it already.

Harried fingers rubbed raw
                           Strings taken
pulls attempted  
works Only on those
who think in a rut  
             immured by experience
to be a way
Who knew what He did
                 she certainly did not
  


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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
The movement of your words

on the screen add a dimension to this poem. I'll need to read this several more times before I quit scratching my head, but it's a puzzle worth puzzling. Well done.

jim : )

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