empty doll

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miss_trust
miss_trust
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I can barely look at you
Doll parts, perfect and fake
You’re missing something, dear
That scarecrow, tin man and lion knew

A fist to the world, raised,
That’s not power, pride, spine
You’re missing something, dear
It’s the raising, make a singular million-man march

Affected but not effected
You made it so far on fakery
You’re missing something, dear
A crowd of onlookers your Wizard

Your pendulum’s stuck
Or I don’t understand depth
You’re missing something, dear
Wading pool kid, get more than your feet wet

miss_trust
miss_trust
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
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Some great ideas and images, but it felt like they should flow like music and I couldn't dance to it.

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