- Erotic Poetry
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her creamy flesh glowing in the pale candlelight she kneels ankles crossed, back straight.
her breasts pushed forward, nipples hard like pink erasers she awaits her fate..
her eyes wide in disbelief, girl stares up at Sir her lower lip quivering.
knowing her place she waits with fear the sinking feeling that she has displeased Him wounding her very soul..
her mind spins at the thought of being alone cast out of His favor.
sent away being deemed unworthy of Master
her tears spill flowing from her eyes, her heart breaking into infinite pieces as the colar is removed
- COMMENTS
GuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago...I really can't rate this very high at all. You use very odd punctuation and, my feeling is, you are not familiar with poetry at all. I commend you for writing - anything - but this is prose, a very short erotic story - not poetry. I have looked back at other submissions of yours and notice this is how you present yourself. Others may disagree but you do not write poetry. Try reading some of the poems offered in here then go back and turn your prose into poetry, it's close but still prose.
Tess
