Envelopings

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Azure waters, sinking in
the fluids envelop
slowly permeate,
Is it a dream?
that floating,
              that sinking,
                           that open-eyed look,
taking all that is clear,
Take all that is warm,
drown herself she did.

cold waters swallowed,
eerie lights, senses slowly filling.
Sometimes, its warm and often not,
The Sun came down, lapped the wave tips
Stretched out a hand,
whispered a breeze caresse
as she lay in the embrace
she needs.

Cares taken, and made
into puffs of
scudding clouds
blow, see them scatter,
              pearls before
sparkled glints
her hair a moving mass
of writhing trails

He was caught and twined again.
was she done ,
              Or did He accept
Waves always lap,
and she rent asunder ,
offered Him what
He needs and what Feeds Him.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Over my head.

I loved this right up to the last stanza. Very powerful imagery. I drowned in the last part, but I still liked it a lot.

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