Epiphany

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demure101
demure101
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A sudden rift reveals clear sky
behind the dense grey clouds -

bright fierceness makes me blink
and shade my eys: too beautiful this dizzy white
for comfort; too great a contast for
                               my tired eyes -

and oh, the effort of taking in all,
the murderous task of retaining it all,
the brittle happiness, the chilly knowledge
                               of limitation -

but then the rift quickly closes
and thankfully my pupils widen into a sleepy stare
                               again.

demure101
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NeonuroticNeonuroticalmost 12 years ago
"the brittle happiness, the chilly knowledge of limitation -"

Great line by the way.

I enjoy the use of natural things made into metaphor. However, I didn't quite understand the stylized line breaks and believe it took away, giving the reader something "just nice" to look at. Overall, this is good poem and imagery, though needs a quick spell check.

(I did mention this poem in Poetry Discussion and Feedback forum.)

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
#2 HOW DO WE MAINTAIN THE CLARITY

of a strobe moment, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WE MUST HURRY

the bong is going out, TK U MLJ LV NV