- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Epitaph 930
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Someday I'll love ya, baby
Someday I'll die on my couch and decay
And when the tox squad comes in
To clean up the mess - and throw open the windows
I hope their hearts break
out in song
She - would have wanted it that way
Hell - she would have wanted to sing along
- COMMENTS
Bill Dadaover 16 years agoSome people are just lucky in love, I suppose. It would make a hell of a musical.
annaswirlsover 16 years agodamn I wish I were better at pinpointing what I love about a poem. But this one I love. It had a Quentin T. kind of feel, the last two lines the lines from the theme song in the background to the scene. and lord what a horrid wonderful scene
wildsweetoneover 16 years agoi mentioned this submission in the new poem review thread in the Poetry Forum. the 50% rating is so that it does not affect future ratings. - wildsweetone
