Escape of a Breath

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 10/16/2022
Created 06/22/2004
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Hand in hand we walk into the field
The light of evening dyes the jack pine orange
White and lavender lilac stand guard over pale blueberry blossoms
Wildflowers sing in a chorus of color

He ties my fingers together with a strawberry vine
Kisses them softly
“I’ve captured you”

I smile and kiss him back
He captured me long ago

We lay on the ground
Cushioned by a bed of clover
Our fingers dance together
Watching the golden clouds
As they chase each other across the sea of sky

I try to fight
But a sigh escapes

He touches my face
“What’s wrong?”

I put my head on his broad shoulder
“This is the closest I’m ever going to come to heaven.”

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
I'm confused

The one thing this poem could really benefit from is an introductory quote from another source at the top. There is a certain sweetness, but I don't know who the people are.

quietpolyquietpolyalmost 20 years ago
perfect

Beautiful. Precise. Every poem should be this way.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Nice...

...work, lost. Few wasted words or phrases. Enjoyed this!

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
sweet!

I really liked the idea of capturing fingers with strawberry vine

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