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there were tell tale signs
etched  in poetry-
illegible scribble in a journal,
pre-computer days.
almost as if attempting
to disguise the pain.
recollections I can't recall.
words i failed to write
and can't forget.
the times you played golf
'til 11:30 at night
and
came home smelling
as if you
just
showered.
the leather date book
you covet
received from "a vendor"
that same christmas we said
it's over.
where would we be
had it not been for therapy?
"try to look at life
from his perspective,"
she said.
 i did.
7 years later i'm digging out
my perspective,
brushin' off the dust,
hangin' it over the fireplace
yep. that's my point of view.
it's not that difficult to interpret-
just look at the tell tale signs
etched in my poetry.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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Paul069Paul069over 18 years ago
Deep feelings

Jenna, I love this one it really shows depth and a true understanding of the trials we all go through.

Keep up the good work. You are surely a sparkling Diamond waiting to be discovered!

d2

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Great attitude and lovingly presented. A nice read.

Tattler

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
love it

Good JOB! sandspike

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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What power,

what feeling;

what the hell was he thinking?

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