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Click hereAnd so Jack would eat no far
as he lived upon Desolations Peak
where mosquito's wings beat with
dramatic stillness
andeverysecondof70daysrollforsolongit
passes by in a blurr
And there I sat in the Eternal City
monumental vanity vying for attention
the life of 3000 years in 12 weeks
drawn out as timeless
car horns drown out the mosquitos
so why must sunsets be
MAD ORANGE FOOLS RAGING
when pools of light scream
loudly enough?
Your unique poet's voice is strong as ever--your willingness to experiment with language and form is not just amirable; it results in some wonderful poetry. It really is great to see you posting new work. :)
Ange
Go Homer! Why indeed with the sunset?
you got me revved I wanna go write....dang!