Etruscan Bones

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darkmaas
darkmaas
26 Followers

Yesterday
I saw a girl
who had your bones.
She had her hair
in loose retro braids
like you wore
in ’84.
I watched her laughter
‘cross the bar.
I had to leave
my drink unfinished.

Remember when
we hired that cab
to take us
from Malacca
to Singapore?
The driver spoke some English
so we whispered in pig Latin.
When he asked where we were from
you grinned and lied
with sham pride
“We are Etruscan.”
He smiled and claimed he often
had people from Etrusca
in his cab.

You slept most the way
your head upon my lap.
As I watched
the regimental rows
of rubber trees march past
I let my fingers trace
the line your collarbone
made across the curve
from throat to breast.

She had the same line ‘neath her sweater.
Her cheek bones high like yours
but the nose was wrong.

Those days spent in Penang
on rubber time
with shutters closed against the sun
but beams of light
got through the cracks
stirred up the dust
and fell in lines
across your skin.
Your bones beneath the skin
bent those lines of sunlight
into sweat-stained hieroglyphs
that danced with every breath.
If I but knew the code
I could have read your bones
like poetry.

Sophia told me
after her last visit
that your daughter
now in college
had your bones.
The thought that
neither time nor Death
could defeat good bones
made me smile.

darkmaas
darkmaas
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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
strong images

throughout and i take note. darkmaas, you have a very nice style. as eve says, it does belong elsewhere and you should definitely search the journals for placement. i for one don't always write with a ton of images as i work from a bukowski angle. nevertheless a good job......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A Thoroughly Enjoyable Poem

An excellent poem with some raw emotion in the words. Heartfelt...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
gorgeous

thank you for sharing this with us, we are fortunate--

the ending was so personal, I felt like the whole poem was getting a feel for the characters, so that the last lines could hurt like only people you care for can hurt.

annaswirls

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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I read your poem this morning and wondered why it's here. I hope it ends up in other places.

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