- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Evangelion
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Click hereI am not Prince of Darkness
but of the Dim Gray Light. My Evil
is more just Bad
or Cranky, hardly terrifying
to even the readily terrored.
I am the woolen reflection
of a brighter son from whom
all gifts granted come.
O, love my desperate frugality,
my indecisiveness, my easy gloom.
In my soil is sown your morning’s bloom.
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KOLKOREover 16 years agoOn the rare occasions when I put forth something I know that I like any feedback - even critical. So with this in mind I'd say, there is "a woolen reflection" of an interesting theme here. To me it just feels like it needs more work. For example: much is hinted but not developed or called but not demonstrated. Just my take.
