everyone's a critic, lol

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lawrobbur
lawrobbur
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the comment was
"converse" on something other than sex
but it's a sex site
so what did you expect
**
if this was a political site
i'd "converse" on obama
but since it's a sex site
i "converse" about adults doing their momma
**
anybody can write little dirty ditties
that's what i was told
but i'm a master at my craft
so that statement won't hold
**
if you don't like my poems
or think they're too explicit
here's your thirty day notice
from my thoughts you're evicted

lawrobbur
lawrobbur
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4 Comments
IraniaIraniaover 14 years ago
I r crackin' up

'Tis funny poem u rite. Me thinks its outasite. Bein thar don that. Bye by cretic.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

I thought it was fun. I realize not everyone may feel that way, but the personal attacks seem unnecessary and what's the point?

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 14 years ago
Cute, very cute.

But remember that there is no escaping "anonymous". He/she seems to be everywhere so just ignore all those ugly comments and keep writing.

William smythWilliam smythover 14 years ago
Problems?

"Anonymous" seems to have problems. Too young perhaps to understand Lisa's poems or too old to appreciate them?

And naturally, unwilling to identify himself.

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