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Click hereThey enraptured me with love,
My heart bound to their strings.
They twisted, yanked, and pulled
Whilst murmuring the sweetest things.
They worshiped me as Venus,
They bowed down at my feet.
They only broke my heart,
With words they didn't speak.
They promised me a kingdom,
They granted me a throne.
They gave me what I needed,
Then left me to my own.
Authors Note: This is my first submission and I'm hoping that it will be found up to par. I don't often write poetry but I am a great fan of it. Please don't hold back any criticism as I would love to make this a learning experience!
You're off to a good start. The poem nicely captures the initial feelings, although the last line made me want additional elucidation of the feelings expressed. Please do continue your poetry writing.