- Erotic Poetry
- Excavation
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She comes to you with trepidation.
Not quite knowing what your dominance means.
As her eyes rise to meet yours, she is shaking.
The anticipation and wonder reflect in her countenance.
Recognize her need, her desire, her fervent wish.
Explore her depths with your control; temper it with tenderness.
Battle the walls of her fortress; make them fall.
Tear down her barricades; shatter her boundaries.
Release her from her inhibitions, those self imposed bindings
That prevent her from being who she truly is.
Tame her demons; unleash her innermost thoughts and beliefs.
Free her from fear; help her to realize all that she is.
Dig deep, deeper; discover the treasure within her.
Unearth her precious gems; polish them to full brilliance.
Her riches are many, brought to light by your mastery.
Your reward is great, complete and everlasting.
- COMMENTS
f-cynyrover 18 years agoyour poem aptly named is about you bringing out what you have so long buried deep inside,. again i liked it and the theme of self discovery. and self acceptance.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoThe poem is telling and passionate and evocative.
The comments that it is simply "telling" shows shallowness and an inability to read deep into the lines.
All art is, after all, telling. It tells of the heart and the soul of its creator, and this particular one tells a great deal.
Read it deeper.
YDDalmost 20 years agoIs an exposition,
and a series of instructions,
made poetry by a title?
This is pure "telling" with little fresh or strong imagery.
It does not "show" or evoke much of anything.
The effort would benefit from restructuring.
