- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Expectations Disintegrate II
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Expectations Disintegrate II
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Each Master will teach one of their distinctive ways, hardening at first that stratum of armor that so flimsily protects his charge from the world that surrounds.
As the shield solidifies it begins to crack beyond repair.
Only when that false façade crumbles completely will she truly be his to mold.
The implements of the Master are diverse and effective.
The essence contained within must be melted; to heel the cracks left behind by the ones that endeavored before.
For only when all the old expectations and ways of the past are stripped away does the real journey begin.
Then and only then can the new ways learned honor the teacher in the results attained.
That is when the true treasures appear.
That is when the Master can gently prod her onward. Forcing her steps to the edge of the branch and further on into the midst of flight. He can not soar with her but he can show her how to use the wings she never knew she had.
Once in flight she can then achieve his wanton desires and wishes. Then she can truly ascend higher than even he expected; gifting to him true gratification and truly pleasing the one that gently forced her to fly.
- COMMENTS
normal jeanalmost 17 years agobut didnt love it even though I did give you a five. Because it touched my heart in a sentimental way.
I think you could rework the structure in this piece and make it somewhat better. A few of the lines are way too long and you really should lose the word "false" in front of facade.
To me, facade already implies falseness.
I enjoyed the read and hope to see more, as I agree with the assertions in your work, mostly.
:)
nj
