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In my mind it’s so clear:
You get the furniture in the den.
I’ll take the living room.
You get the master bedroom suite.
I’ll take the futon.

I can divide our belongings
fair and equitably
down to the most insignificant
material object.

But tell me, please:
Who gets the heartbreak?
Who takes the blame?
Who gets the guilt?
Who takes the anger?

And which one of us
will keep the little blue vase
that sits by the side of the bed?

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
enuf said......

in the piece.........very good......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wonderful

Such a small expression of such a big emotion. Well done, O.

Fly

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
very familiar

feelings , and we all have the list of things.

I love the mystery of the blue vase.

Very nice work Mistress O.

CupidsGurlCupidsGurlalmost 19 years ago
HeartBreking~

What a great poem.

I loved the flow and the simplistic wording.

Short and to the point.

Another One to keep and re-read.

More Please~~!!!!

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