- Erotic Poetry
- Fabulous Feet- Deja Vu
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On a warm and sunny day
A beautiful woman walked my way
In spite of the summer heat
I could not keep my eyes off her feet
Those nicely painted toes caught my eye
As they were painted like the sun lit sky
So shiny, smooth, and bright
I could not get them out of my sight
She walked over and said with a smile
Would you go with me for awhile?
I stood right up to my feet
Held her hand as we did greet
She led me to her place of rest
This day so far was the best
We walked in through the door
She asked me if I wanted more
With a grin upon my face
Said lead me to the special place
To the couch we walked with ease
As my mind raced with ways to please
She washed her feet then sat by me
Pleasure she desired as I could see
She laid down as I took her foot in my hand
She moaned as I sucked, it was so grand
Her other foot rubbed my cock
As I sucked her hips did rock
My hands slid down her thighs
She let out seductive sighs
My cock was hard and she was wet
How much better would this get?
My fingers traced along her lips
More and more she rocked her hips
Up and down her foot rubbed my cock
Then all of a sudden I was in shock
A horn sounded loud and I was awaken
Then a bus pulled up & my bench started shakin'
Startled by the driver as he opened the door
It was only a dream and I wanted much more
I got on the bus and walked down the aisle
This head lifted up, looked at me and smiled
It’s like we had met some time before
She looked like the lady who wanted more
- COMMENTS
Loganseroticaalmost 11 years agoAuthorI appreciate the feed back and that's my goal is to improve as you go. When others see your profession then they see potential. I appreciate the comiments and I hope you enjoyed. Thanks
twelveoonealmost 11 years agoavoid rhyming coups
especially avoid awkward constructs for the sake of a rhyme
Held her hand as we did greet
now this
As they were painted like the sun lit sky
Blue? perhaps with a few stray clouds
5ed because of your gracious attitude in a thread
todski28almost 11 years agoI have been working on rhyming couplets a lot in the last couple of weeks and yours all read very well. I liked it, however my opinion is the bottom of the poetry pecking order here :-)
