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Click hereRed leaves drift as crispness bites the air
Tee shirts for those who dare
The colours of the season shine
The birds of the air all whine
Fall, so fresh
We plead just for another breath
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todski28over 10 years agoPretty good
I think despite the fact that it is adding a rhyme line 4 is your weak link in this piece and it could probably be cut out.
