Falling for Keeps

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And I relaxed
Into your lazy listless embrace
Helplessly
Hopelessly
Enchanted
Mellow dramatic
And over analyzed
Until the sy-la-bells bleed.

I held on
Two seconds
Too long
Because I was tempted
By your T-shirt
And the final frontier
That whispered just beneath

I’m falling for keeps this time
On both scrapped knees
Cos you just keep leaving me
So God damned breathless.

June 16th 2006

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
yes, I know

i mention spell check in a PC with a misspelled word...shame on me...there is no spell check on the PC thing and i might have had a little too much to drink, lol

Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
potential

if you owuld just use your spell check!!!

keep writing, you have some killer work inside you, I can just feel it

maria

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