Far Under The Into

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Here I lie between the below
And I'm paddling fast yet I'm moving so slow
Its all above me set in stone;
And time is what I long to atone.
So I look up front while im pulled behind,
And as I see I slowly go blind;
Thinking of where I cried far under the into
As the skies weep I find my way through;
And as the floors seep I end at the start
So I hope for day but im stuck in the dark.

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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
well done

keep swimming!

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Beginning to End, a perfect circle

I really enjoyed your content, context, and flow in this delightful piece. A poem that stimulates the mind.... Thanks for sharing.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Hey BlackDalhia...

Thy poetry noir is quite fascinatin'!!

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