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Click hereLady Fate smiles at you thru clenched teeth
Her cruel sense of humor disguised behind pretty blue eyes
Hands hidden behind her back concealing what she holds
Could be success in one hand
Failure in the other
Or perhaps Love in the right
Rejection and heartbreak in the left
One never knows which hand she will touch you with
And sometimes she wantonly plays tricks on you
Behind her malicious grin she holds fire in one outstretched palm
And grasps a cloaked dagger in the other
So you are fucked no matter what you do
Here's a case where a better writer can pull off a well done job with caps on each line start and no punctuation.
with great style. The last line was a fucking grand slam. The only thing that stuck out to me like a sore thumb was "thru", no idea why, I use it all the time. -2d
masquerading as a woman of the world.
As the Beatles so succinctly put it:
"I once had a girl,
Or should I say
She once had me."
Regards, Jack
Mentioned in today's New Poem Reviews: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22044486#post22044486
This piece is bitter, but it somehow still manages to make me smile.