- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Father
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Click hereNo one shows
the pride in me
that you did...
I felt it.
No one knows
that you speak still
clearly to me...
I hear it.
Ice blue eyes
your length of limb
in my children...
I see it.
All these years
past memory warms
beloved father...
I miss you.
- COMMENTS
sadangelalmost 14 years agoThe ellipses do not distract from the poem at all. It tells me that there are things you left unsaid. Who can say it all in just a few words. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Epmd607about 14 years agoreally wreck the poem. Other than that there's not much that makes the poem feel uniquely personal to the reader. Anyone could have written this, there's nothing that defines whatever Cloudy is as a poet or person.
