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Click hereA delicate edge,
a trail of electricity,
lightly sailing
around tender curves,
up and down and around.
The feather:
going slow then speeding up,
faster, slower,
up, down,
finding sensitive spots
on peaks, in valleys,
teasing, tormenting
thrilling.
Building passion,
frustration,
elation,
titillation.
The first four lines are good, though the remainder of the poem needs a little work. Nice poem.