- Erotic Poetry
- Feel
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Feel ~
the breath of my mouth, touch your face;
the heat of my body, caress each place;
the stroke of my tongue, as I taste your skin;
the beat of my pulse, as we begin.
the soft tender flesh, as we start to move;
the warm tenderness, as we pick and choose;
the moisture of sweat, when we try to hold back;
the hot heated moment, when we make our attack.
Feel ~
the drum of my heart, as our bodies approach;
the deep inner walls, of the passion we coached;
the sounds that vibrate, when our lips press tight;
the quivers we make, as our souls take flight.
the moment when we collapse on our sides;
the rhythm we make, when we use just our minds;
the connection, our bodies now have;
the power that glides, through our tender hands.
Feel ~
the desire and refuse to hold out;
the passion and don't stop your shouts;
the lust and watch it consume;
the moment that I come unglued.
the kiss, that my lips will give;
the tongue that just wants to live;
the hands, that hold you close;
Feel the one that loves you the most.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoYes, they finally got your change in; it looks even better now that it's seen the light of day.
Anonymousover 18 years agoDC:
You put a lot of feeling into this one. It ripped my socks off. Thank You. Ronnie W.
LeBrozover 18 years agoOkay, so I'm cheating and voting as though you liked my suggestion about that one word and made the change - and even though there are several other possibilities, it still leaves the core intact - the very heart of what you've written. So there - take your "5" in that spirit.
