feels so right

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gasping choking

desparately trying to get some breath

thoughts swirling, blackness threatening

a quick spurt of precious air

every nerve end tingling

heartbeat racing

pushing past the frustration

patience is key

eyes wide open

even as tears stream down

letting go and just feeling

trusting

struggling with desire

swimming through it all

squelching those “me” thoughts

so far left to go

no control in that moment

only trusting that you are safe

in someone else’s hands

everything so right in your world

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