- Erotic Poetry
- Fill Me Up
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The purr of sexuality rung in the air
as that fine body swung to the rhythm
of love. Sex exposed horniness talked
its' craving way through my body as
I watched, dazed with swelling need.
The turn of the last dance rang out
with victory as she came to me and
licked my overly sensitive ear, "baby
I'm an all you can eat buffet." Those
words buzzed through my head as
she walked away, winking seductively.
The opportunity came and I did not
waste a moment, to taste that oh so
delectable piece, I'd been waiting for,
for so damn long, tonight she would
know ecstasy in my arms, and I'd
enjoy all the pie I could handle.
- COMMENTS
UnderYourSpellover 13 years agoI agree with Tess needs editing to make it more of a poem than prose, but I like the idea behind it and you have some good lines to play around with
GuiltyPleasureover 13 years agoToo prose-like for my taste, breaking prose into shorter lines doesn't make it poetry. You've got some nice ideas here but they're lost in the jungle of words. (This is purely opinion meant to help, not discourage.)
Tess
