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Cordelia
Cordelia
11 Followers

guerrilla heart-squeeze
      from unfair
      to rakish
advantage

the ball’s (always) in your court

and gold-flecked gratitude
      dribbles
my inadequacy
keeping
cardio-grammatical
      sentences
from spilling what
may really be forming

poised at
the edge of silence

draping smooth verbs
      in red
japanese-lantern-light
and obscuring with
      polysyllabic prestidigitation

tease like stocking –
      couched
in the almost-pleasure
of your

beautiful absence

Cordelia
Cordelia
11 Followers
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems.

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jthserrajthserraover 20 years ago
I love the...

phrasing here, excellent wordplay. Linguistic gymnastics I call it. Very good.

jim :)

Maria2394Maria2394over 20 years ago
something about

you Cordelia...I just love your poetry...your spacing, allowing for breaths, ( if you dare take one) and the way you choose *just* the right words... always a good read when I click on your poems, always :)

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