Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereguerrilla heart-squeeze
from unfair
to rakish
advantage
the ball’s (always) in your court
and gold-flecked gratitude
dribbles
my inadequacy
keeping
cardio-grammatical
sentences
from spilling what
may really be forming
poised at
the edge of silence
draping smooth verbs
in red
japanese-lantern-light
and obscuring with
polysyllabic prestidigitation
tease like stocking –
couched
in the almost-pleasure
of your
beautiful absence
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems.
----------
phrasing here, excellent wordplay. Linguistic gymnastics I call it. Very good.
jim :)
you Cordelia...I just love your poetry...your spacing, allowing for breaths, ( if you dare take one) and the way you choose *just* the right words... always a good read when I click on your poems, always :)