tagNon-Erotic PoetryFilling in the Low Spots

Filling in the Low Spots


There's all kinds you'll find
 dented souls and concave minds
 holes in the heart that need plugging
 smoothing over the spots hurting
 for gentle earth and care.

 And even when you're good at restoration,
 master body man, par excellence,
 that chassis that you're dragging around
 has more dents than car 8
 at the fairgrounds demo derby.

 There's some that say it's totaled
 no hope for that wreck that keeps on rolling,
 long past it's time for the junkyard...
 and I don't know why they're so worried about my ride;
 perhaps it's their pride in the old antique,
 worry that repairs may be too costly,
 afraid the mechanic will do more harm than good,
 silly, I know; it just needs sandpaper, Bondo
 and a lot of loving care, filling in
 the low spots

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