Final Thoughts

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My eyes cry salty tears.
They are tears of pain.
This pain is from my soul.
I hear my soul, its screaming for release.
How can I deny my soul freedom?
I cannot and must not be selfish.
Hot water feels like heaven on my naked body.
Shivers run up and down my spine.
Ever so slowly my body sinks further and further until my nose is the only thing helping me take my final breaths.
My thoughts are going crazy in my head as I say one last word to God.
Please wrap your arms around me with love and care.
With that as my last thought, I finish what I started.
My soul must be released.
Taking my final breath I am completely surrounded by water.
My heart starts pounds harder.
Trying to hold my breath a little longer.
I finally let the bubble rise and I let go forever.
My toes and fingers curl from the pain I feel in my chest.
Final thoughts of pulling out to breathe run though my mind.
But it’s to late.
I’m gone.

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