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Click herehey mister, dance
like you did before
like yesterday in holy heat
of summer afternoon
sun, señoritas, and sangria
fuelled fantastic, frantic
immortal, all man
conqueror casanova
hey mister, say it
say it once again
all those powerful pretty little lies
that makes the pretty little
giggly things in their
summer short pretty little things
swoon and flutter beneath your voice
hey
mister
tell us how
how you sweet talked
wooed, winked, sang
swirled those feet like magic
stirred the lemonade
with your pocket stash
clear liquid fire, almost tasteless
in the right doses
for her
remember her?
all sweet, all smiles
nightingale laugh, ponytail on the side
and big, beautiful hazel brown eyes
dancing with the grown-ups
for the very first time
she has a name
do you even know it?
did you ask
when you swooped her slender frame
and let her bask in adult attention
and a reassuring smile
under lantern light
of incoming night
and carried her, drunken drowsy
stunned silent by surprise
until escorted out of sight
and still
she didn't realise
you'd stake that claim
and shatter a world harbored holy
in a too young heart
hey mister, tell us why
lost in lust, rioja high
you didn't care
or couldn't hear
her cry
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems.
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The way this is written, it moves along at a quick and interesting pace. Your words held my attention from the start to the finish.