- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Fire in Eyes
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Some say my end will be a gun,
some say with a knife.
When last I heard "Cy's found us, Hon!,"
it was a blade took my life.
Yes, it's true I perished once,
but then the cutest EMT
whose fun bags were miraculous,
Hallelujah! brought me back
despite the blood that I had splat,
and though it seems like arrogance,
I swear, I swear, it is a fact
she smiled when she unzipped my pants.
So if I had to perish twice
I wouldn't want the big guy sliced.
Trigger-happy angry Cy's
not so great
but would suffice.
- COMMENTS
Epmd607about 10 years agoI doubt you took the latter for inspiration, but it reminded me of her style, fluid comedy something Frost was sorely lacking. nice work, as always.
Also, I don't know what story you're referring to? The only Cy's I can think of our from Deadwood, Major League Baseball and a google search pulls up a stabbing from Wichita.
greenmountaineerabout 10 years agoAuthorAngie,
The rhyme, if not the near rhyme, I thought would be consistent with the Frost poem. The non-rhyme in the 2nd stanza, I'm afraid, was a hasty mistake. It should have been "rescued me."
Angelineabout 10 years agoof homage to Fire and Ice and that really distressing story in the news. I would love to understand how you choose rhyme and near rhyme and why you choose to go off the beat where you do. And you used "fun bags" in a way that didn't make me want to run shrieking from your poem! Also the poem is really cohesive in that you sustain both the narrative and the Frost-ness to the end. Just a great read, so thank you.
