Fire Meets Ice

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Three candles three colors
dripping art onto white canvas
eyes masked by black silk

her mind cannot differentiate
between melted wax
and dripping from the ice

not till it flows down breasts
Slaloming between the red, white, and blue
filling the small hollow

He dips his tongue into her navel
slightly salty from her sweat
watching her speckled chest

rise and fall with her excitement
and her guarded anticipation
of what is coming next

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thegirlfriday11thegirlfriday11over 19 years ago
sexy

and thought provoking

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
hmmm

red, marks from the heat of wax, or from the cold of the ice, which can cause blue as well, white as her skin,very sexy poem, enjoyed thinking of it with my eyes closed :)

** i also dont use the thermothingie

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
The last two verses...

...don't seem to meet the expectation of the first three. Perhaps they were more obvious than the nice metaphors earlier.

I also wonder why "red, white and blue".

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