- Erotic Poetry
- Fireside Frolic
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Flames flicker in fireplace, our fond fire flares up.
Good glow from the grate, we glow great from our grand giving.
Hearth is hellishly hot, our hunger has the heat of heaven.
Logs alight illuminate our lair,
love lights us as we lie and lap in our lover's legs.
Coals crisply crackle as we completely comfort our companion.
Evening embers enchant; our erotic expression excites ecstasy.
- COMMENTS
vrosej10over 13 years agoIt reminded me of a traditional form of poetry, the name of which escapes me, that relies on alliteration as key to its form. I think it has something to do with Beowulf, but I might be wrong. My only prob with it is the fourth/fifth lines. I think they should be one in keeping with the rest of the work. I'm giving it a recommend.
twelveooneover 13 years agoOverkill is counterproductive
1,2,3 to 1,2,3 to
1,2,3 to 1,2,3,4...
Logs alight illuminate our lair, Doesn't really qualify as relief. A pattern should lead to something, not a different pattern. You should look at some old English, Norse, or Modern Welsh poetry, looks like you'd have fun with it.
I gave you a 100 anyway
