First blood

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Sweaty hairline-
Breasts move up and down,
Rhythmic like a lake during our storm
And your hands-
Cold, with apprehension? With fear?
Please don't make me stop darling girl
Strawberry fuzz.
I want to feed on your patches,
Summer harvest kills only the half dead
Swinging you-
With the sombre stare of a child's game,
One last time on the playground, this night.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
There is

Something I like about this poem. I think it needs a bit more polish with structure, but this poem is still good erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This is hot

and so literate. I really enjoyed reading it. The last two lines are great.

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