First Impression

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FIRST IMPRESSION

sometimes it's not easy
to find the words
when trying to give it all my best.
it seems as if i'm missing
that certain element
of which will take me to the top.
but when i look at
from the perspective:
TRY - TRY - TRY - AGAIN.
does that show
i'm persistent enough
to get to this point?

so-

doesn't it seem fitting
to use this same philosophy
with the opposite sex?

and-

can a killer line
pull you in
when other avenues
have failed to get results?

then-

creativity is the only answer.

so-

does this leave you with a mind
in a body of flexing lines
that has great shape
for a first impression?

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Beware those killer lines that leave you looking shallow!

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