First light

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Your skin glistens, liquid silver
as our heartbeats slow
and we listen
to each breath we take.

In dawn's silence
I remember
how we rode orgasmic waves again and again and again.
Arching, twisting,
scratching, nibbling
skin-slapping and tongue kissing
every inch of flesh.
Bared desires, diminished inhibitions all night
till at first light,
we untangled.

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Lots of tell, need more show. Love the last line.

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