tagErotic PoetryFirst love

First love

byBooMerengue©

his touch so tentative
filling her vision with
boiling red rage
he caresses her softly
and green bile chokes
he stands to show his love
she tries to run from
his purple hideousness
her ankle caught
she fades to black.

"It's just a bad dream!"
says Mom

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